Jasmine Hart

This is really good. I like the allusion to Edgar Allen Poe. I especially love the last two stanzas. Your use of language is really great. Though I think you ...

Hi. Welcome! The flow here is very good. Like the others, I think expansion would be good. I'd also suggest punctuation, but I know that this is sometimes a case ...

Hi. Welcome to YWS! Your imagery is really lovely and the freshness of the first line drew me in. I'd change; "with romance in the air so thick that you ...

"The Smell of Victory. “Smell that boys? Now that is the smell of victory.” The Sergeant and his four remaining soldiers [s]all [/s]inhaled deeply. “Gas,” Samuel said, raising an arm ...

I'm reading "Phaedra" by Racine. :) Think I'll move onto "The Butcher Boy" next, so I have it read for next term...

Briar Willow said nothing when I entered, and so I presumed her to be sleeping. I pulled off my coat and shoes as quietly as I could, and crawled back ...

Happy belated birthday! Hope you had a lovely day.Tell me if this is very wrong... Clarisse I rolled my eyes at the latest "drama" taking place two seats in front ...

Sorry for my absence. There was a problem with my pc.TN, Briar has just told Willow that she's sneaking out to post her letters, and asked if she can try ...

Is this following a plan, or do I just post whenever?

Briar Willow was being very quiet, though I couldn't judge how much so, as Aunt Rosemary ensured that we were never in the same room at the same time. I'd ...

Woah. This made my breath catch in my chest. A lot of good points have been made, and I'll try not to repeat them. I'd change "guzzle" to "gulp" as ...

Thanks Kit, JFW, Rory, and Phindin. The bios are great. Ya, Rory, I was picturing this as set more in a rural area, except for Rosemary's house... I'm not sure ...

Thanks JFW. So ya, now it looks like Violet is the only option for one of the Willows...hope this is ok with you guys. Given that Kit and Cowgirl both ...

Thanks Kit! Oooh, problem here dudes. Looks like you both posted bios for Willow at the exact same time (what are the odds?)...would one of you mind being Holly or ...

Abigail I was beginning to go crazy. Nothing made sense anymore. Now that I was a constant guest, I had little to keep me occupied, and, when I was unoccupied, ...